I continued to review the animatic and got some feedback from frans and some of the other tutors which is always really helpful in getting the story to be more clarified. I added the scene of tubbs walking passed his mother and flipped it for conitnuity for when he goes outside, but further feedback recommends i widen the shot and also maybe include the door to the front on this shot so when he appears outside it isnt too jarring.
aside from that i have some timing issues with the actions but other than that it looks like its getting better.
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